Transition

Section 1:

Hellen Keller, an American author

killed Abraham Lincoln, the No.16 American president

He said, “Winter comes, can spring be far behind?”

She said, “I want to travel.”

and that’s why a little knowledge is a dangerous thief.

·         Identify the subject of Paragraph 1 : Abraham Lincoln want to comfort Hellen Keller when she is sad.

·         Identify the subject of Paragraph 2 :  Little knowledge will lead people to a dangerous way.

·         Transition : Abraham Lincoln want to comfort Hellen Keller when she is sad, but his words makes Hellen Keller more sad, so Hellen Keller want to travel to escape from Abraham Lincoln.

Section 2:

Angela D merkel, a prime Minister of  Germany

talked to XiJingping, general secretary the CPC Gentral committee

He said, “Can I have a cup of wine?”

She said, “You are so stupid.”

And that’s why barking dogs seldom bite.

·         Identify the subject of Paragraph 1 : Angela D Merkel want to stop Xi Jingping continuing drinking wine.

·         Identify the subject of Paragraph 2 : People who want to do something bad will not post it on his face.

·         Transition: In others’ eyes, Angela D Merkel and Xi Jingping are good friend, but their relationship is not good as others see.

Section 3:

Rihanna,singer actress and fashion designer.

ate M ark Twain, the famous author

He said: “ What a sad story! I  lost my credit card with all my money.”

She said: “Hey  babe, I fall in love with you.”

That’s why all’s fair in love and war.

·         Identify the subject of Paragraph 1 : Rihanna ate Mark Twain.

·         Identify the subject of Paragraph 2 : People will do everything during love and war.

·         Transition : Rihanna love Mark Twain who does not love her, so she ate him to live with him forever.

Section 4:

Maria Sklodowska-Curie , a scientist .

kissed Benedict Cumberbatch , an English actor .

He said :”It’s delicious .”

She said :”I fall in love with you “

That is why “an apple a day , keeps the doctor away”

·         Identify the subject of Paragraph 1 : Maria Sklodowska-Curie fell in love with Benedict Cumberbatch.

·         Identify the subject of Paragraph 2 : If people eat an apple every day, he will have a healthy body.

·         Transition : Benedict Cumberbatch fell in love with Maria Sklodowska-Curie and see her as his sweet heart. He can’t live well without her.

Section 5:

Taylor Swift,  the pop singer kicked

Justin Bieber, the pop singer.

He said,”Be my girlfriend right now.”

She said:” I just want to marry you, do not refuse me!”

A bad penny always turns up.

·         Identify the subject of Paragraph 1 : Taylor Swift and Justin Bieber love each other.

·         Identify the subject of Paragraph 2 : What you have done will affect you later.

·         Transition : Taylor Swift and Justin Bieber love each other but their families will not support them.S they can’t get anything from their family.

Crime Ver.2

Ghost is a bad guy during his child age. He smoked at an early age and always fights with some social adults who have on job to do like thief. Although he was the best one in his class, he was caught cheating in the test at least three time. Besides, he usually goes out for a whole day and does not come back home at night. Of course, he is easily to get angry and mad, therefore, he always hurts others when he fight with others. However , he hide all these things deeply and went to college. So when he became the top one in his class without cheating, he was so happy and believed his past will never be found confidently. Therefore, when his roommate got a higher scores than him and told that to the people around them. The people around them didn’t see Ghost as a God of study as before. Ghost could not stand that thing and believed all the thing were caused by his roommate. So he invited his roommate to his home and used an ice blade to kill him when he was bathing.

trait and crime

Trait: confidence

Crime

Ghost is so confident that he thinks he could do everything successfully and would be the best man in the world. Of course, he was the best one in his class. But one day, his roommate had a test with him together and got a higher scores than which Ghost got. According to this situation, his roommate was so happy and told the thing to every person he met. As a result, everyone around them said something which gave a strong impact to Ghost. Ghost was so angry about the way in which people saw him and talked about him. In consequence, Ghost thought all the bad thing happened on himself were caused by his roommate. To end the worst situation, he wanted to kill his roommate. So he went home to make an ice blade and invited his roommate to public baths. So the day they went to the public baths, Ghost brought the ice blade. In the changing room, Ghost used the ice blade killed his roommate immediately as his roommate changing his clothes. In consequence, when police came in they couldn’t find where the weapon is, they gave up to search the criminal.

Assignment: Identify Cause

#synagogueattack

Why the hashtag is needed : To let people know these cruel thing which happened on Jewish and attract the attention,

The existed problem:

     Source 1 : After the attack, Both of  the Palestinians  and the Israelis want to hold the holy site in them own hand. Besides, some  radical organizations did some terrorism event to arouse anger of countryman. These organization are trying to make war break out.

     Reference:  Agencies. (2014, November 18). Four Israelis killed in Jerusalem synagogue attack. Retrieved from http://english.sina.com/world/2014/1118/755622.html

     Source 2 : The power of French anti-Semitism is increasing to a high level , as a result of that, Jewish who live in France are in a dangerous situation.

     Reference:  Shlomo Pitrikoysky & Gil Ronen. (2014, July 14). Paris synagogue attack:’ We could have had a Kristallnacht’. Retrieved from : http://www.israelnationalnews.com/News/News.aspx/182878#.VGw2nfT4WgQ

Effect : Attract people’s attention to the unfair position of Jewish.

Step1 of hashtag

#ManAgainstMachine
Explain: A song of Evile's special "Enter the Grave"
Purpose: Attract people's attention especially Evile's fan to the new produced song
Audience: Evile's fans
Who is participating: Evile's fans , managers, fans' family and friends
Kind of participation: Event, people, blog, press conference, meet-and greet with fans, news
Reference: Bob Moczydlowsky.(2014, November 12). Twitter Q&A with Garth Brooks. Twitter Blog. Retrieved from https://blog.twitter.com/2014/twitter-qa-with-garth-brooks

reference

The discrimination which other people give to the gay makes the author be afraid of her “two moms” family. I think that people should not  have discrimination against the gay , because it is also a kind of life style.  Besides, even if we have discrimination against the gay, we should not let our unfair value influence our children. The reason is that children’s thought like a white paper and the paper will be dyed by the environment where the children live. On the other hand, child needs to experience some difficulties so that he or she would grow up and become a person who  would be trusted by other people and work on his own. 

Comparion

Similar	Difference
Written for the people who care about child	The range of the reader is different. Alice’s article is more wider.
Post on the website	Alice’s article was posted on a international magazine , Elisabeth’s article was posted on a university’s magazine
Point clear	Elisabeth’s article also tells about something bad when the stress over the boundary
Equinoctial narrative	Alice’s article use a big example ,but Elisabeth’s article only use someone’s words