Transition

Section 1:

Hellen Keller, an American author

killed Abraham Lincoln, the No.16 American president

He said, “Winter comes, can spring be far behind?”

She said, “I want to travel.”

and that’s why a little knowledge is a dangerous thief.

·         Identify the subject of Paragraph 1 : Abraham Lincoln want to comfort Hellen Keller when she is sad.

·         Identify the subject of Paragraph 2 :  Little knowledge will lead people to a dangerous way.

·         Transition : Abraham Lincoln want to comfort Hellen Keller when she is sad, but his words makes Hellen Keller more sad, so Hellen Keller want to travel to escape from Abraham Lincoln.

Section 2:

Angela D merkel, a prime Minister of  Germany

talked to XiJingping, general secretary the CPC Gentral committee

He said, “Can I have a cup of wine?”

She said, “You are so stupid.”

And that’s why barking dogs seldom bite.

·         Identify the subject of Paragraph 1 : Angela D Merkel want to stop Xi Jingping continuing drinking wine.

·         Identify the subject of Paragraph 2 : People who want to do something bad will not post it on his face.

·         Transition: In others’ eyes, Angela D Merkel and Xi Jingping are good friend, but their relationship is not good as others see.

Section 3:

Rihanna,singer actress and fashion designer.

ate M ark Twain, the famous author

He said: “ What a sad story! I  lost my credit card with all my money.”

She said: “Hey  babe, I fall in love with you.”

That’s why all’s fair in love and war.

·         Identify the subject of Paragraph 1 : Rihanna ate Mark Twain.

·         Identify the subject of Paragraph 2 : People will do everything during love and war.

·         Transition : Rihanna love Mark Twain who does not love her, so she ate him to live with him forever.

Section 4:

Maria Sklodowska-Curie , a scientist .

kissed Benedict Cumberbatch , an English actor .

He said :”It’s delicious .”

She said :”I fall in love with you “

That is why “an apple a day , keeps the doctor away”

·         Identify the subject of Paragraph 1 : Maria Sklodowska-Curie fell in love with Benedict Cumberbatch.

·         Identify the subject of Paragraph 2 : If people eat an apple every day, he will have a healthy body.

·         Transition : Benedict Cumberbatch fell in love with Maria Sklodowska-Curie and see her as his sweet heart. He can’t live well without her.

Section 5:

Taylor Swift,  the pop singer kicked

Justin Bieber, the pop singer.

He said,”Be my girlfriend right now.”

She said:” I just want to marry you, do not refuse me!”

A bad penny always turns up.

·         Identify the subject of Paragraph 1 : Taylor Swift and Justin Bieber love each other.

·         Identify the subject of Paragraph 2 : What you have done will affect you later.

·         Transition : Taylor Swift and Justin Bieber love each other but their families will not support them.S they can’t get anything from their family.

Crime Ver.2

Ghost is a bad guy during his child age. He smoked at an early age and always fights with some social adults who have on job to do like thief. Although he was the best one in his class, he was caught cheating in the test at least three time. Besides, he usually goes out for a whole day and does not come back home at night. Of course, he is easily to get angry and mad, therefore, he always hurts others when he fight with others. However , he hide all these things deeply and went to college. So when he became the top one in his class without cheating, he was so happy and believed his past will never be found confidently. Therefore, when his roommate got a higher scores than him and told that to the people around them. The people around them didn’t see Ghost as a God of study as before. Ghost could not stand that thing and believed all the thing were caused by his roommate. So he invited his roommate to his home and used an ice blade to kill him when he was bathing.

trait and crime

Trait: confidence

Crime

Ghost is so confident that he thinks he could do everything successfully and would be the best man in the world. Of course, he was the best one in his class. But one day, his roommate had a test with him together and got a higher scores than which Ghost got. According to this situation, his roommate was so happy and told the thing to every person he met. As a result, everyone around them said something which gave a strong impact to Ghost. Ghost was so angry about the way in which people saw him and talked about him. In consequence, Ghost thought all the bad thing happened on himself were caused by his roommate. To end the worst situation, he wanted to kill his roommate. So he went home to make an ice blade and invited his roommate to public baths. So the day they went to the public baths, Ghost brought the ice blade. In the changing room, Ghost used the ice blade killed his roommate immediately as his roommate changing his clothes. In consequence, when police came in they couldn’t find where the weapon is, they gave up to search the criminal.

Assignment: Identify Cause

#synagogueattack

Why the hashtag is needed : To let people know these cruel thing which happened on Jewish and attract the attention,

The existed problem:

     Source 1 : After the attack, Both of  the Palestinians  and the Israelis want to hold the holy site in them own hand. Besides, some  radical organizations did some terrorism event to arouse anger of countryman. These organization are trying to make war break out.

     Reference:  Agencies. (2014, November 18). Four Israelis killed in Jerusalem synagogue attack. Retrieved from http://english.sina.com/world/2014/1118/755622.html

     Source 2 : The power of French anti-Semitism is increasing to a high level , as a result of that, Jewish who live in France are in a dangerous situation.

     Reference:  Shlomo Pitrikoysky & Gil Ronen. (2014, July 14). Paris synagogue attack:’ We could have had a Kristallnacht’. Retrieved from : http://www.israelnationalnews.com/News/News.aspx/182878#.VGw2nfT4WgQ

Effect : Attract people’s attention to the unfair position of Jewish.

Step1 of hashtag

#ManAgainstMachine
Explain: A song of Evile's special "Enter the Grave"
Purpose: Attract people's attention especially Evile's fan to the new produced song
Audience: Evile's fans
Who is participating: Evile's fans , managers, fans' family and friends
Kind of participation: Event, people, blog, press conference, meet-and greet with fans, news
Reference: Bob Moczydlowsky.(2014, November 12). Twitter Q&A with Garth Brooks. Twitter Blog. Retrieved from https://blog.twitter.com/2014/twitter-qa-with-garth-brooks

reference

The discrimination which other people give to the gay makes the author be afraid of her “two moms” family. I think that people should not  have discrimination against the gay , because it is also a kind of life style.  Besides, even if we have discrimination against the gay, we should not let our unfair value influence our children. The reason is that children’s thought like a white paper and the paper will be dyed by the environment where the children live. On the other hand, child needs to experience some difficulties so that he or she would grow up and become a person who  would be trusted by other people and work on his own. 

Comparion

Similar	Difference
Written for the people who care about child	The range of the reader is different. Alice’s article is more wider.
Post on the website	Alice’s article was posted on a international magazine , Elisabeth’s article was posted on a university’s magazine
Point clear	Elisabeth’s article also tells about something bad when the stress over the boundary
Equinoctial narrative	Alice’s article use a big example ,but Elisabeth’s article only use someone’s words

Project 2

PartⅠ. Supporting articles

Alice G. Walton:

①   Alice G. Walton. (2014, October 11). The Problem With Ebola In The Media. Forbes. Retrieved from http://www.forbes.com/sites/alicegwalton/2014/10/11/the-problem-with-ebola-in-the-media/

Topic: The possibility that Ebola breaks out in America is a little, and South Africa’s Ebola needs some management

Stance: People should care more about Ebola

Where be published: Forbes

②   Alice G. Walton. (2014, October 27). Compound In Cocoa May Reserve Age-Related Memory Loss. Forbes. Retrieved from http://www.forbes.com/sites/alicegwalton/2014/10/27/compound-in-cocoa-may-reverse-age-related-memory-loss/

Topic: High doses of flavanols can affect people’s brain and memory.

Stance:  After the research completed, there might some special product of chocolates.

Where be published: Forbes

③   Alice G. Walton. (2013, October 16). Why Oreos Are As Addictive As Cocaine To Your Brain. Forbes. Retrieved from http://www.forbes.com/sites/alicegwalton/2013/10/16/why-your-brain-treats-oreos-like-a-drug/

Topic: Why Oreos can addict people?

Stance: Oreos may make good effects for people

Where be published: Forbes

Elisabeth Øvreberg:

①   Elisabeth Øvreberg. (2013,February 24). Reindeer Meat Is As Healthy As Fish. ScienceNordic. Retrieved from http://sciencenordic.com/reindeer-meat-healthy-fish

Topic: Reindeer meat is better than fish

Stance: Reindeer meat is better than fish

Where be published:  University of Tromsø – The Arctic University of Norway

②   Elisabeth Øvreberg. (2012,December 4). Field For Religious Feelings. ScienceNordic. Retrieved from http://sciencenordic.com/fields-religious-feelings

Topic: Religious feeling express in lots of ways, crop circle is an example

Stance: crop circle is appropriate for today

Where be published:  University of Tromsø – The Arctic University of Norway

③   Elisabeth Øvreberg. (2012, October 10). Leprosy Rages Still. ScienceNordic. Retrieve from: http://sciencenordic.com/leprosy-rages-still

Topic: Leprosy is destroying people’s lives as usual

Stance: Leprosy is a terrible disease, people should care about it.

Where be published: University of Tromsø – The Arctic University of Norway

 Conclusion: Both of the authors are writing generally

Part Ⅱ:

Source 1 : How Parents’ Stress Can Hurt A Child, From The Inside Out

A: Determine the Rhetorical Situation

  Author: Alice G. Walton

  Publication: An international publication

  Audience: International audience who care about the bad stress effect on child

  Stance: The stress from parents will hurt child

B: Examine the language

Tone: natural

Specific words:

①  parents’ levels of chronic stress can seriously impact a child’s development.

②  For developmental and neurological disorders, while there are almost certainly genetic factors at play, it is possible that environmental factors (like the environment in utero) may be a contributing factor.

③   Epigenetics is the study of how genes can be turned on or off with certain environmental cues, stress being one of them.

④  So pregnancy isn’t the only time that parental stress can affect the development of the offspring 

⑤  This bubbling, happy prattle of parents talking with each other is music to a kid’s ears.

All of the routes tell that parents’ behavior affects their child. The first three shows that parents’ stress will hurt child.

Evidence of being objective: “Remember, no one ever had a perfect pregnancy, and no one’s a perfect parent,” says Code.

This sentence says that parents’ stress is unavoidable.

Evidence of  giving opinion: The author didn’t give her own opinion.

C. Strong point: Parents’ stress will hurt child

D. Weak point: We should do our best no matter what situation we meet

Source 2 : Stress Is Good For Children

A: Determine the Rhetorical Situation

  Author: Elisabeth Øvreberg

  Publication: a local publication

  Audience: Local audience who car about the good stress effect on child

  Stance: the stress from parents will help child perform well

B: Examine the language

Tone : natural

Specific words:

①  stress is healthy, especially for children.

②  "Everyone needs to experience stress. This is how we learn to solve challenges, build knowledge and acquire new skills," says Friborg, 

③  Parents cannot do everything for their kids. If children learn at an early age to overcome their shyness, they will develop self-confidence and a feeling that they can cope with different social situations.

④  Being able to cope with stress liberates many positive emotions. The desire to learn increases.

⑤  People who can cope with stress find it easier to forget negative and painful things, and they find it easier going through life.

The first two routes says that stress is necessary for child. The last three routes says that stress has good effect for child.

Evidence of being objective: You have to know where the boundary is. Parents must establish an environment where their children can learn to master the situation − and this is very important.

This sentence says that there is also a boundary of stress we should care about.

Evidence of giving opinion:  The author didn’t give her opinion in a clear way.

C. Strong point: The stress from parents is good for child grow up

D. Weak point: Child need support from family and friends, and there is a limit of stress which parents give to child.

New Project

  Source 1 :Elisabeth Øvreberg. (2012,April 3). Stress is good for children. ScienceNordic. Retrieved from http://sciencenordic.com/stress-good-children
  Summary: Everyone needs to experience stress and this will help child grow up. However, there are some parents sweep away the stress which could let their child make progresses. That is because child must be confident so that they could live in the society well and have a lot of friend, but most child can not do the first step to get rid of shyness. When child cope with stress they could forget the unhappy things they meet. On the other hand, if child have a bad diet they might be sick by the reason of stress. Also friendship and the family's support can protect child from the high stress.
  Source 2 :Alice G.Walton. (2012,July 25). Sow parents' stress can hurt a child,from inside out. FORBES. Retrieved from http://www.forbes.com/sites/alicegwalton/2012/07/25/how-parents-stress-can-hurt-a-child-from-the-inside-out/
  Summary: Parents' stress will hurt child at two stages. The frst one is when child is in utero. In this moment, if mother is coping with high stress her body will give a signal to child's brain and make it be serious all the time. Finally the child's brain will be hurt and become defective. The second stage, of course, is when child born. At this moment, if parents give extreme stress during the first few years of life, the child's gene will change,even many years later,the gene will not change back
  The Topic: Stress which parents give to child will affect child
  The Clash: Whether the stress that parents give to child will hurt child or not
  The side of two suouce: Source 1 is talking about stress will help child and will not hurt child. Souce 2 talks vaout stress will hurt child during the whole life even the child is in utero.

Rewrite draft 1.5

 Source 1: Bruni,F. (2014,Oct.28). Towards Better Teachers.The New York Times. Retrieved from http://www.nytimes.com/2014/10/29/opinion/frank-bruni-toward-better-teachers.html?ref=opinion
 Source 2: Cohen,R. (2017,Oct.27). A Climate of Fear.The New York Times. Retrieved from http://www.nytimes.com/2014/10/28/opinion/roger-cohen-a-climate-of-fear.html?partner=rssnyt&emc=rss
 Source 3: Maida,A. (2014,Oct.27). Are ebola Quarantines Necessary? The New York Times. Retrieved from http://www.nytimes.com/2014/10/28/opinion/are-ebola-quarantines-necessary.html?ref=opinion

Assignment

Stance: The author think Mratin is a bad boy and his death is resulted in his own behaviors. The author has discrimination against Blacks.
Eidence:①Martin was suspended from school for having a baggie that contained marjuana residue in his bag.
        ②Martin was suspended with friend for writing "W.T.F" on a hallway locker.
        ③A Securtiy guard found "burglary tool" in Martin's bag.
        ④Zimmerman said that Martin kocked him down with a single punch and slammed his head into sidewalk several times

Final draft 1.5

  My topic is what will happen when people leave cats and dogs together.Why the topic is interesting, because people always think that dogs and cats are enemy. What they will do when they stay together interest me.
  Source 1: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oOzqIsksmdI
  Summary: When cat lives with dog, most time they live as the enemies
  Quote: "Ha ha ha ha" a people laugh.(FRIKK,2013)
  Source 2: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ynC0jLGBA_U
  Summary: A cat fight with a dog like a duel between two knights.
  Quote: "Ha ha ha " a boy laugh after the serious confrontation.(Dorsey Shaw,2011)
  Source 3: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_z7EKD6N3HM
  Summary: Dog live with cat ,some of them live as a family , however ,the rest part of them live as the enemies.
  Quote: In some part, there are people laugh"Ha ha ha".(Tiger Production,2013)
  We can make an conclusion that when cats live with dogs,they may be friends,however , almost every situation they become enemies.


Reference:
  Source 1:FRIKK.(Producer),FRIKK.(Producer).（2013）."Cats Vs Dogs-Supercut Compilation 2013" URL:https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oOzqIsksmdI
  Source 2:Shaw,D.(Director),&Shaw,D.(Producer).(2011)."Dog vs. Cat vs. Ennio Morricone". URL:https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ynC0jLGBA_U
  Source 3:Samo & Ziga.(Director),Samo & Ziga.(Prducer).(2013)."Dogs and cats meeting for the first time-Cute and funny dog & cat compilation". URL:https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_z7EKD6N3HM

Respnese of Trayvon Martin was suspended three times from school

I think everyone has his own value, fair or unfair is determined by the person's own value. So I think the scores of class are not important, just do my best is enough.
To the passage, I think the truth whether Trayvon Martin had stolen the jewelry and take drugs or not is still a mystery. However, he attacked George Zimmerman may be a real thing, because no one would shoot people for no reason. Besides, when I see the words which Martin's mother said "They kiiled my son and now they're trying to kill his reputation" I am shocked. Because I think that Martin was dead and we should give the respect to the dead, continue doing thing which would affect the dead and the dead's familiy is inhuman.
Audience: the people who cares about race relation and the fair between different human species.
Stance: objective

Summary

Amy Bishop is a woman that have a high telligence but without any control force to control herself so that she can't doing well to fit the social life. However, because of her rich talents,many people think highly of her. She just like a bomb which wear a beautiful clothe outside. As a result of that, people only can see her appearence but can not see her real mind. We can make an conclusion that the person who have rich talent but can not control himself is dangerous, a clever brain may not be excellent sometimes.

draft 1.5

After reading that passage, I think that we should keep in touch with our parents ,grandparents and other relatives. Because the elderly people always feel lonely when they live in the convalescent home even in their home. Besides, the elderly people always hide their emotion that they want to see their child and grandchild, so we should be initiative. On the other hand, war destroy lots of things especially families. In addition, the convalescent home should make the elderly people live as they live at home, however, the nurses in the convalescent home now just do their work as missions, they don't put their emotion into the work. That's why the elderly people who live in the convalescent home feel lonely than before.

Spider

Key term: eating way
    All of the three movies eat the spider.The first one eat the washed spider after fried it, the second one make the spider on fire just like BBQ. However the third one just eat the spider which is alive. I think the first one is the best,because the spider has been washed before it be cooked,and put some seasoning. The second one's taste will have a good taste, but the third one , I think , is very dirty and may be sick after eating it.
    In my opinion, eating spider is best to wash it and then cook it. Otherwise, we may be sick by the virus which is in the spider's body.

the end of project1

What was most frustrating about Project1?
There was a draft which I copy other's on the Internet.Some draft I didn't do very well.
What was most rewarding?
Everyday's Wyr question make me feel happy, and I know how to find sources on the Internet.
What would you do difficultly?
Something which I can't understand really good, and when I find sources the English makes me crazy.
Anything else you would like me to know?
I'm so happy that I choose your class

Final Draft 1.4

  My topic is what will happen when people leave cats and dogs together.Why the topic is interesting, because people always think that dogs and cats are enemy. What they will do when they stay together interest me.
  Source 1:https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fU2lY04kjGk
  Summary: A cat fight with a dog, when the cat will be defeated another cat jump in and hit the dog.
  Quote: "Ha ha ha ha" a man laugh.(BestVines 2015, 2014)
  Source 2:https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ynC0jLGBA_U
  Summary: A cat fight with a dog like a duel between two knights.
  Quote: "Ha ha ha " a boy laugh after the serious confrontation.(Dorsey Shaw,2011)
  Source 3:https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_z7EKD6N3HM
  Summary: Dog live with cat ,some of them live as a family , however ,the rest part of them live as the enemies.
  Quote: In some part, there are people laugh"Ha ha ha".(Tiger Production,2013)
  We can make an conclusion that when cats live with dogs,they may be friends,however , almost every situation they become enemies.

draft 1.4

What happens when someone win the price of 5 million dollars？
   The winner of the largest sole jackpot in U.S. lottery history stepped forward to claim her winnings. Gloria C. Mackenzie, 84, bought the winning $590.5 million ticket at a Publix supermarket in Zephyrhills , Florida.
URL:: http://www.businessinsider.com/what-to-do-if-you-win-the-lotto-2013-6#ixzz3FSzOtAiM
     Example 2 : Andrea Schwartz appeared on "The Price is Right" last year and won $1,200 in cash, a Mazda 2 compact car, a pool table, a shuffleboard table, earrings, all together worth $33,000.
URL:: http://www.dailymail.co.uk/news/article-2396851/Is-winning-The-Price-Right-cracked-Former-contestant-reveals-PAY-2-500-prizes.html#ixzz3FSzrlDqY
     Example 3: Three months after winning half of the biggest Powerball lottery jackpot in U.S. history, Mark Hill still meets friends for morning coffee at a local convenience and do many things as he didn't win the price. 
URL::http://www.huffingtonpost.com/2013/02/25/missouri-powerball-winner_n_2749795.html

My Favorite film

a.Transformers 4
b.After the campaign "Chicago Battle", the autobots and Decepticons intelligent robot disappear  from the scene, the survivors also began a new life.Cade lost his lover but have his daughter Tessa.One day ,Cade find the boss of autobots and repair it.But the peaceful lives of humans and autobots have been broken again.The Deceptions and threats from ancient will invade the Earth.After overcome many difficulties, the autobots finally protect the Earth from the invaders.

9.22homework

1 how to be popular
2 how to be a good game player
3 how to choose nice shoes to match clothes
4 how to cheat others
5 how to play a role well in society



another to topic4:how to play a good role before others
The difference: the former one seems to tell something bad to other people, but the later one like telling people how to deal with people is a good topic.

homework

Several years ago,there is a war between The Food Industry and Darkness Food Industry broke out. After a great number of chefs' competitions over. Both of two organizations sent their ACE to decide the winner. Eva, the player of Darkness Food Industry cook her self-confidence work "MaPo ToFu" which all the judges thing highly of. On the other hand, the player of The Food Industry called Adam saw this situation. He knew if he cook normal food, he would lose the competition. Therefore he chose to make dumplings，the legendary food, which he can't make out every time.
  At first, Adam made the pork into mince and add the balm, salt, potato starch and mix them again. Then left them a few minutes to make the mixture dry. At the same time, he take some dumpling wraps out and put them on the table with their edge wet. After that, Adam put some pork mince on the dumpling wraps with spoon and fold the side together. With all the dumplings completed, Adam breathed a sigh of relief. Finally Adam put the dumplings in boiling water. After three boiling of the water,the dumplings were picked out and put on the plate. All of them seemed are made of gold.
  In the end, when all of judges ate the dumplings, they couldn't help crying.As a result, The Food Industry became the winner and protect the world diet from Darkness Food Industry.

The difference

The Chace's article is a comprehensive example of the process of the Rihanna's song be created. All the passage is about how much make this hit song costs and why. On the other hand, NG's passage is about flirting and how to do it well.There are many kinds of example in the article. I think the number of example kind is the main difference.

How to flirt

Step1:Reading the flirting book to learn some ability
Step2:Find a right place to flirt
Step3:Establish appropriate eye contact
Step4:Reciprocate flirting cues
Step5:Do something to relax your partner

Fifteen topics of interesting things

①How to be healthy
②How to make dumplings
③How to make tea
④How to play badminton
⑤How to make steamed stuffed bun
⑥How to play golf
⑦How to play basketball
⑧How to take care of a baby
⑨How to make a sandwich
⑩How to build a castle
⑪How to lose weight
⑫How to arrange clothes
⑬How to understand an article quickly
⑭How to make a dog live with a cat peacefully
⑮How to live for a week with only fifty yuan

"Bring Out the Flrit in You"

After reading this passage,I think  maybe it is the time for us to know these thing ๑乛◡乛๑.This passage main tell about flirting and give some example of how to do it well.But which I couldn't understand much better is why the author write this passage and the meaning of the representative list.

The response of"War of the World"

After read this passage,may it can be called an interview report.I think this report is very interesting.I like the way that these people say.And what they said also interests me.For example,the sentence"we could have done the sex lives of watermelons or something interesting about chrysanthemums" makes me very funny.What I do not like is there are too many strange words for me to understand this reading well
Besides,these two following questions make me think a lot "

Were we really so unsophisticated in 1938? I mean, is it so different from now?"From

 these two questions,I think that we are becoming clever when the age is advancing.So we may not be so unsophisticated that will believe the authority.We are dialectic to judge what we see and what we hear.Maybe in 1938,some people want to relax themselves ,so they pretended to be cheated.