draft 1.5

After reading that passage, I think that we should keep in touch with our parents ,grandparents and other relatives. Because the elderly people always feel lonely when they live in the convalescent home even in their home. Besides, the elderly people always hide their emotion that they want to see their child and grandchild, so we should be initiative. On the other hand, war destroy lots of things especially families. In addition, the convalescent home should make the elderly people live as they live at home, however, the nurses in the convalescent home now just do their work as missions, they don't put their emotion into the work. That's why the elderly people who live in the convalescent home feel lonely than before.