2014年10月28日星期二

Rewrite draft 1.5

 Source 1: Bruni,F. (2014,Oct.28). Towards Better Teachers.The New York Times. Retrieved from http://www.nytimes.com/2014/10/29/opinion/frank-bruni-toward-better-teachers.html?ref=opinion
 Source 2: Cohen,R. (2017,Oct.27). A Climate of Fear.The New York Times. Retrieved from http://www.nytimes.com/2014/10/28/opinion/roger-cohen-a-climate-of-fear.html?partner=rssnyt&emc=rss
 Source 3: Maida,A. (2014,Oct.27). Are ebola Quarantines Necessary? The New York Times. Retrieved from http://www.nytimes.com/2014/10/28/opinion/are-ebola-quarantines-necessary.html?ref=opinion

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  1. Ghost, Much improvement. The reason this does not pass is that these are your sources for the upcoming essay. Please find appropriate sources for Essay 1.
    You also need to pay attention to:
    - the format for the date.
    - the title: what gets capitalized and what doesn't
    - the organization of sources (don't label them, just put them in the correct order).
    Please use an APA Style Guide or see me if you need help. You may revise again. Please email me when you do AND include a link in the email to your post.
    NP

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