New Project

  Source 1 :Elisabeth Øvreberg. (2012,April 3). Stress is good for children. ScienceNordic. Retrieved from http://sciencenordic.com/stress-good-children
  Summary: Everyone needs to experience stress and this will help child grow up. However, there are some parents sweep away the stress which could let their child make progresses. That is because child must be confident so that they could live in the society well and have a lot of friend, but most child can not do the first step to get rid of shyness. When child cope with stress they could forget the unhappy things they meet. On the other hand, if child have a bad diet they might be sick by the reason of stress. Also friendship and the family's support can protect child from the high stress.
  Source 2 :Alice G.Walton. (2012,July 25). Sow parents' stress can hurt a child,from inside out. FORBES. Retrieved from http://www.forbes.com/sites/alicegwalton/2012/07/25/how-parents-stress-can-hurt-a-child-from-the-inside-out/
  Summary: Parents' stress will hurt child at two stages. The frst one is when child is in utero. In this moment, if mother is coping with high stress her body will give a signal to child's brain and make it be serious all the time. Finally the child's brain will be hurt and become defective. The second stage, of course, is when child born. At this moment, if parents give extreme stress during the first few years of life, the child's gene will change,even many years later,the gene will not change back
  The Topic: Stress which parents give to child will affect child
  The Clash: Whether the stress that parents give to child will hurt child or not
  The side of two suouce: Source 1 is talking about stress will help child and will not hurt child. Souce 2 talks vaout stress will hurt child during the whole life even the child is in utero.

Rewrite draft 1.5

 Source 1: Bruni,F. (2014,Oct.28). Towards Better Teachers.The New York Times. Retrieved from http://www.nytimes.com/2014/10/29/opinion/frank-bruni-toward-better-teachers.html?ref=opinion
 Source 2: Cohen,R. (2017,Oct.27). A Climate of Fear.The New York Times. Retrieved from http://www.nytimes.com/2014/10/28/opinion/roger-cohen-a-climate-of-fear.html?partner=rssnyt&emc=rss
 Source 3: Maida,A. (2014,Oct.27). Are ebola Quarantines Necessary? The New York Times. Retrieved from http://www.nytimes.com/2014/10/28/opinion/are-ebola-quarantines-necessary.html?ref=opinion

Assignment

Stance: The author think Mratin is a bad boy and his death is resulted in his own behaviors. The author has discrimination against Blacks.
Eidence:①Martin was suspended from school for having a baggie that contained marjuana residue in his bag.
        ②Martin was suspended with friend for writing "W.T.F" on a hallway locker.
        ③A Securtiy guard found "burglary tool" in Martin's bag.
        ④Zimmerman said that Martin kocked him down with a single punch and slammed his head into sidewalk several times

Final draft 1.5

  My topic is what will happen when people leave cats and dogs together.Why the topic is interesting, because people always think that dogs and cats are enemy. What they will do when they stay together interest me.
  Source 1: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oOzqIsksmdI
  Summary: When cat lives with dog, most time they live as the enemies
  Quote: "Ha ha ha ha" a people laugh.(FRIKK,2013)
  Source 2: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ynC0jLGBA_U
  Summary: A cat fight with a dog like a duel between two knights.
  Quote: "Ha ha ha " a boy laugh after the serious confrontation.(Dorsey Shaw,2011)
  Source 3: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_z7EKD6N3HM
  Summary: Dog live with cat ,some of them live as a family , however ,the rest part of them live as the enemies.
  Quote: In some part, there are people laugh"Ha ha ha".(Tiger Production,2013)
  We can make an conclusion that when cats live with dogs,they may be friends,however , almost every situation they become enemies.


Reference:
  Source 1:FRIKK.(Producer),FRIKK.(Producer).（2013）."Cats Vs Dogs-Supercut Compilation 2013" URL:https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oOzqIsksmdI
  Source 2:Shaw,D.(Director),&Shaw,D.(Producer).(2011)."Dog vs. Cat vs. Ennio Morricone". URL:https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ynC0jLGBA_U
  Source 3:Samo & Ziga.(Director),Samo & Ziga.(Prducer).(2013)."Dogs and cats meeting for the first time-Cute and funny dog & cat compilation". URL:https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_z7EKD6N3HM

Respnese of Trayvon Martin was suspended three times from school

I think everyone has his own value, fair or unfair is determined by the person's own value. So I think the scores of class are not important, just do my best is enough.
To the passage, I think the truth whether Trayvon Martin had stolen the jewelry and take drugs or not is still a mystery. However, he attacked George Zimmerman may be a real thing, because no one would shoot people for no reason. Besides, when I see the words which Martin's mother said "They kiiled my son and now they're trying to kill his reputation" I am shocked. Because I think that Martin was dead and we should give the respect to the dead, continue doing thing which would affect the dead and the dead's familiy is inhuman.
Audience: the people who cares about race relation and the fair between different human species.
Stance: objective

Summary

Amy Bishop is a woman that have a high telligence but without any control force to control herself so that she can't doing well to fit the social life. However, because of her rich talents,many people think highly of her. She just like a bomb which wear a beautiful clothe outside. As a result of that, people only can see her appearence but can not see her real mind. We can make an conclusion that the person who have rich talent but can not control himself is dangerous, a clever brain may not be excellent sometimes.

draft 1.5

After reading that passage, I think that we should keep in touch with our parents ,grandparents and other relatives. Because the elderly people always feel lonely when they live in the convalescent home even in their home. Besides, the elderly people always hide their emotion that they want to see their child and grandchild, so we should be initiative. On the other hand, war destroy lots of things especially families. In addition, the convalescent home should make the elderly people live as they live at home, however, the nurses in the convalescent home now just do their work as missions, they don't put their emotion into the work. That's why the elderly people who live in the convalescent home feel lonely than before.

Spider

Key term: eating way
    All of the three movies eat the spider.The first one eat the washed spider after fried it, the second one make the spider on fire just like BBQ. However the third one just eat the spider which is alive. I think the first one is the best,because the spider has been washed before it be cooked,and put some seasoning. The second one's taste will have a good taste, but the third one , I think , is very dirty and may be sick after eating it.
    In my opinion, eating spider is best to wash it and then cook it. Otherwise, we may be sick by the virus which is in the spider's body.

the end of project1

What was most frustrating about Project1?
There was a draft which I copy other's on the Internet.Some draft I didn't do very well.
What was most rewarding?
Everyday's Wyr question make me feel happy, and I know how to find sources on the Internet.
What would you do difficultly?
Something which I can't understand really good, and when I find sources the English makes me crazy.
Anything else you would like me to know?
I'm so happy that I choose your class

Final Draft 1.4

  My topic is what will happen when people leave cats and dogs together.Why the topic is interesting, because people always think that dogs and cats are enemy. What they will do when they stay together interest me.
  Source 1:https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fU2lY04kjGk
  Summary: A cat fight with a dog, when the cat will be defeated another cat jump in and hit the dog.
  Quote: "Ha ha ha ha" a man laugh.(BestVines 2015, 2014)
  Source 2:https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ynC0jLGBA_U
  Summary: A cat fight with a dog like a duel between two knights.
  Quote: "Ha ha ha " a boy laugh after the serious confrontation.(Dorsey Shaw,2011)
  Source 3:https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_z7EKD6N3HM
  Summary: Dog live with cat ,some of them live as a family , however ,the rest part of them live as the enemies.
  Quote: In some part, there are people laugh"Ha ha ha".(Tiger Production,2013)
  We can make an conclusion that when cats live with dogs,they may be friends,however , almost every situation they become enemies.